"Got a light?" he said.
She tried hard not to notice
that he had no cigar.
Secret science by plantae
Once, long ago
a planet in my grasp
I settled for less.
Souvenirs by laflaneuse:
Never forget, oh cows,
Baudelaire ended up being
dead meat, too.
Box by iamababblingbrook
Nudes are disturbing.
Let us box her and blank out
her soft helpless eyes.
Diagnosis by SoniaBudner:
Scissors, please, nurse.
He will not notice, I hope,
that he's lost the thread.
3 by PrincessRouge
Set them on pillars.
Let them watch the white sky
with black binoculars.
More ...
- Haiku Commentary I ~ hogret.deviantart.com/journal/…
- Haiku Commentary II ~ hogret.deviantart.com/journal/…
- Haiku Commentary III ~ hogret.deviantart.com/journal/…
- almcdermid's jux.ta.po.sing i ~ mcdermid.deviantart.com/journa…
- almcdermid's jux.ta.po.sing ii ~ mcdermid.deviantart.com/journa…
almcdermid and I are thinking of putting these together in a book. Good idea, or not?
