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Haiku Commentary II

Thu May 26, 2011, 11:36 PM
More provocative, cryptic collages by my fellow deviants.
Loosely constructed haiku responses by me.




Slide 1 by *jkd-kat



Hard lines, tight numbers
We can measure it all, even
the gold-mined mind




The Military Man by ~DivineIguana



The tree-perched ravens know
He uses his moustache
To make brocade blockprints

Alternatively:

He wishes he were
Edgar Allan Poe
But his mother dresses him funny





Episode 15 by ~drahomira



Here come the bombers
My briefcase is smoking.  Sigh.
The work-week begins




Vanguardia by ~srtapolyester



The corporate vest
is perfectly patterned and cut
Bare legs don't fit




a miscellany by ~fredfree



There's gold-torn brocade
red umber and verdigris fragments
But my life is cardboard




Fever by *audreysmith



Lists and shouting numbers
Sometimes it's hard to hear
The red songbird




asdfs by ~estebanz



You in your shadowed streets
Your angled concrete boxes
Beyond, there is more




Flirtation of a Woman by ~Cikalong



Tornado-twisted
Sky-flung and landscape-anchored
Relationship-bound




a bag head by ~hobophonics



Cross-legged contemplation
My mind a corrugated blank
I've lost my teabag




Say Hello by ~aureliemonjarde



Anonymous salutes
in perfectly creased pants
hiding polkadot briefs




Welcome into my world by ~aureliemonjarde



Think bright floral thoughts
While your husband eats pancakes
And hope they poison him

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:iconlizcohn:
*LizCohn Jun 5, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
his mother dresses him funny...


(I am enjoying re-reading these)


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:iconfredfree:
wonderful! thanks very much!

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:iconnene70:
Once again you hit the nail on the head. :D
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:iconkatdiestel:
thanks a lot. i like your haikus very much!
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:iconhogret:
And I like your collages very much, so don't we make a good pair?
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:iconweedlace:
I want to fave this! How do I fave this! Splendid interpretations!
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:iconhogret:
Tink and mac and I should make a book of these, don't you think?
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:iconweedlace:
Oh, absolutely, positively! A perfect threesome!
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=RichardLeach May 27, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
wow this was fun to look at and read! :clap:

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